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Dear Muse:

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Kimmy-of-the-Darkk
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Faeling, Faeling,
careful now.
Look before you leap, my dear.

Faeling, Faeling
see how far
you've fallen, fall so far.

Faeling, Faeling,
do you know
where the rainbow ends, my dear?

Faeling, Faeling,
is it true?
The world was born of ash?



Faeling Faeling,
tainting me.
Fallen to the abyss of mem'ry, dear.

Faeling Faeling,
subtle torment.
Thou doth plague mine heart.

Faeling Faeling,
two art one
and two again art million, dear.

Faeling Faeling,
Bury deep.
The wise are burned apart.



Faeling, Faeling,
see that door?
Amber and obsid'an, dear.

Faeling, Faeling,
I can't stand
to know what lies beyond.

Faeling, Faeling,
whispering
in hidden depths within me, dear.

Faeling, Faeling,
I'm shocked deaf.
Have I been here before?




Faeling, Faeling,
you've walked out.
Took my wit and san'ty, dear.

Faeling, Faeling,
you left me
shackled and alone.

Faeling, Faeling,
shrillest shriek
shattering my windpipe, dear.

Faeling, Faeling,
I can't sing
I'm stranded in the dark.
Damn this was annoying to write. So. This is a piece dedicated to my muse. Which means I wanted to write it WITHOUT her help. Yeah... Um, don't ask. Lets just say I distracted her and spent way too long writing this. It's MUCH harder to write without my muse.

Also, I've figured something out. If I ever want to write a STRUCTURED piece, I gotta write it as a song.

Note. Guys, I've used shackled twice, and though the imagery is right, it bugs me. Suggestions, please!!

Any questions? Comments? Please, I wait with baited breath!

Kitt, this is for you!
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knittywitty
Of all the days you had to post this. Evil!

You'll sing it to me sometime, right? It always works better when you do.